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I only seek for forgiveness...

Published: Feb 21, 2010

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piuh finally done with this crap O_O

So here we go, next fake screenshot

but this time I picked a scene from one of my OC's stories.

Hjere you can see Tiriel al Rhouyan.
She has been sentenced to death and is now seeking for the forgiveness of his brother whom, in her eyes, she betrayed badly.

ah well...nothing more to say but that it's an amazing fun to see/ imagine one of your OC being in a real anime *___*
SO NIIIIICE

enjoy~

Tiriel © me!
art © ME TOO!

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Teddy33

Mar 31, 2010

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^{First off, I totally love the perspective you chose. It really shows how desperate the character is and also gives a nice view of her surroundings. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
The detail in her clothing is amazing, although probably a bit too much given the sort of empty background (though the details on the stones and the pallet alone are amazing). But I guess it's difficult to add details to a jail...maybe a puddle in the corner? Or a rat hopping past?
The light coming through the window is magnificent, it looks so realistic. Though I personally like the blurred version of the part where the rays hit the floor better, it looks a bit too hard on non-pixelated pic.
I admire your ability to make a lineart look so smooth. 8|
But some coloured parts, especially where the light directly shines upon her head, would be nice.
You copied the typical anime colouring style pretty well, but I miss some decent highlights in the hair. However, that's probably just my opinion. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Razz)"/>
And the cut on her left arm looks a bit too clean too me. Maybe add some blood around it? </evil>
And I just noticed that if you look at it for a longer time you will find tons of little details like the chain and the hair on the floor.
So overall:
I'd totally watch that anime and enjoy every second of it. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="LOL"/>

Sorry for my english, lol. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Blank Stare)"/>}